Guest Author: Anna Katherine

I’m excited to welcome Anna Katherine to Literary Escapism.  A brand new author for me, I had the chance to read Anna Katherine’s new novel, Salt and Silver and it was an interesting take on demons in our society.  Today, we have a great post on telling lies by Anna Katherine. Make sure you stick around for a chance to win a copy of Salt and Silver.

One night six years ago, Allie and her friends got drunk and chanted a fake spell they made up… and accidentally opened a portal to Hell. Now it resides in the basement of the diner Allie runs, and it’s a pain in the ass — mystical crap is always coming out, and then it has to be killed. Demon guts get everywhere, stuff gets smashed up, there are salt circles and sigils all over the place… It gets tedious.

The up side is that Allie gets her own personal demon hunter guarding the Door and killing the demons: a sexy and mysterious, Stetson-wearing, snide-remark-making, dark-eyed demon hunter named Ryan.

But after six years of jibes and sexual tension, the Door disappears at the same time there’s a surge in demonic activity — and no one seems to know what’s going on. Not Narnia the bitchy psychic witch, or Roxie, a kickass demon hunter from the other side of town.

It’s not Allie’s idea for a team of demon hunters to find another Door and go into it to see if Hell is about to take over Earth, but she definitely wants in on that plan. After years of seeing the havoc a Door to Hell wreaks on the world, she’s ready to grow up, take responsibility for helping open a Door in the first place, and kick some demon butt.

Okay, and she’d also like some quality make out time with Ryan, and mortal peril is always a turn-on, right?

You can read my review here.
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Telling Lies

One of the big writer maxims is: Write what you know.

It’s advice that usually works. Do you want real action, real emotions, real consequences? Remember what you’ve done in your own life, and write it out. “Write what you know” is a classic for a reason: pour all that lust for your midnight lover into your sex scenes, add the tiny details about what it’s like to live in Boise, Idaho, and use the uncomfortable memory of what you saw a friend go through in high school for a surprise plot twist to make the reader weep. Nothing sounds more real than what is actually real.

On the other hand we do sometimes run into problems. After all, how many of us have really faced down a demon?

That’s where I think the bookend to the above maxim needs to come in. Write what you know… lie convincingly about what you don’t.

A story is nothing more than something you’ve made temporarily real for the reader–basically it is a giant lie, filled wit just enough truthful moments to make the reader give the lies the benefit of the doubt. This relationship is particularly important for fantasy, science fiction, and, for that matter, romance novels. The author is telling such an enormous whopping lie (a federation of planets, going boldly where no science has yet to make possible!; elves and witches and quests, magical objects and magical creatures; that everyone who wants one can have a happy ending) that the rest of the story had better strike to the heart of the reader with its absolute truthfulness.

Sometimes, though, you just don’t have the sort of experience necessary to “write what you know” and make the story real that way.

In my book, Salt and Silver, the main character is living in a world of demons, Doors to Hell, and sexy hunters who don’t really take her seriously. What do I know about that? Zilch. The closest I’ve come to a demon hunter is seeing the Anthony Hopkins portrayal of Van Helsing (and thinking, “wow, I want to be that when I grow up”). How am I supposed to make that real for the reader?

Answer: Lies.

As any teenager who’s had to explain why she cut school or stayed out past curfew knows, the hallmark of any good lie is that it could be true. I probably wasn’t saving a kitten from a tree at midnight on a Wednesday, but I totally could have been comforting a close friend who had recently lost her grandma/broke up with her boyfriend/fought with her mother and lost track of time. (Since my mother is not reading this, I can confess: that is never what was actually going on.)

When I needed to describe something to the reader — and to myself — I pulled out what I knew, and I took the true parts, and I just rearranged all the other details around it. This leads the reader into knowing there’s a lie going on… but maybe not exactly what the lie is. Here’s one of the more literal examples of this in Salt and Silver:

I stand up and turn around–I can’t see where we came from anymore, but when I close my eyes, I can see the Door, glowing a little, but it’s really far off in the distance. It makes me think of sitting on the roof of the diner, facing Manhattan. Amanda and Stan and I did that a few times together, stared out at the skyline. Without the Twin Towers there, Manhattan could be any city, except for the bridges. But from the diner, the bridges are blurry, fuzzy, and if you don’t know what you’re looking for, you can’t see them.

That’s what it’s like, looking at the Door across the water with my eyes shut.

The memory I have of sitting on a roof, looking out over Brooklyn and Manhattan, and missing the Twin Towers is real, and I’m giving it to the reader. And I’m using that memory–I’m using it to say, And this is what this other experience is like as well.

With something from real life to touch and understand, I’ve made it easier for the reader to accept the lie of the fantasy life my characters lead.

It’s tricky especially because, like any lie, if one bit of it fall apart, the whole structure will fall apart. The extended lies in the book build on the truth and each other, and if any one of the lies rings false, the whole book collapses, the reader throws it against the wall, and the author has failed.

The skilled author–the skilled liar–lures you into her world, carefully builds up the lies, and convinces you that while maybe there isn’t really a Door to Hell in the basement of a diner in Williamsburg, Brooklyn, there certainly could be.
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Thank you Anna Katherine for visiting Literary Escapism.

Contest Time! We’re giving away a copy of Salt and Silver to a lucky commentator and it’s very easy to enter. All you have to do is answer one of these simple questions (or all of them your choice): Has there ever been a part of a story that was an unconvincing lie. Like Anna Katherine said, it’s kind of hard to write what you know in paranormal fiction, so I’m curious to hear if you’ve come across anything that wasn’t convincing enough.

The contest is open to everyone, so everyone overseas can join in the fun as well.

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I’ll determine the winner with help from the Research Randomizer. All entries must be in by midnight on June 16th.

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I am a 30-something SAHM with two adorable boys and a supportive husband who is very tolerant of my reading addiction. I love to read and easily go through about a dozen books a month – well I did before I had kids. Now, not so much. After my first son was born, I began to take my hobby of reviewing a little more serious and started Literary Escapism to help with my sanity. I love to discuss the fabulous novels I’ve read and meeting all the wonderful people in the book blogging community has been amazing.

21 Comments

  1. I think what makes “the lie” suddenly unconvincing in paranormal fiction is the same thing that does it in any genre—when a character suddenly acts contrary to his personality, or the rules of a particular world change just because the plot needs it. It’s the difference between made up and “contrived.” If you’re writing about vampires, and you’ve decided that your vampires can’t shape shift into wolves or bats (as some fictional vampires do), that’s fine, as long as you don’t suddenly have one do it in book three because it advances the plot. Similarly, if a character’s a confirmed bachelor, you can’t just have him propose to his girlfriend of three weeks without a darned good reason! For me, consistency is key.

  2. Great thoughts! I love that last paragraph because that’s how I often feel upon finishing a really great story. I know it didn’t all really happen that way, but it could have. :) Also, what Kimberly said.

    I would love to be entered in the contest! The last time an unconvincing moment pulled me right out of the story was when the author stated that the two main characters had troubled pasts but never backed it up, never provided some layered context to their pasts, with the result that I didn’t buy it. They also got thrown together much too quickly romantically and got over their individual reservations much too quickly. Sigh.

  3. I’ve never read a book with a unconvincing lie,it make believe so anything goes. If I wanted realistic I’d read non-fiction.
    Thanks for the chance to win this book,I read great reviews about it.

  4. Having read paranormal fiction for so long, I will pretty much believe anything if it written in a way that is convincing. An author should have good setting, good explanations, and good flow. Anything poorly done will not convince me because I’ll see it for what it is– a bad attempt to create something that could have been better done by someone else or through another way.

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  5. Great post. I’ve read a couple of books where it seems inconceivable. But, its hard writing about something which we know nothing about since it is so extraordinary. Its the ordinary that is sometimes more unbelievable.

  6. Great post. I havent read anything completely unbelievable before except when it was meant to be. But I have a very good imagination. I do tend to visualize most of what I read and I have had problems doing that at times, which can cause the story to become unclear or hard to follow.

    Salt and Silver sounds like a great book and I cant wait to get the chance to read it.

  7. Katherine so great to meet you and read about SALT AND SILVER! So true on writing what you know — you don’t know —especially with paranormals! I always wanted to ask where you’d find the research on demons, succubus,etc and I’m finding out that much is the creativeness of the author. See when I first started reading a vampire romance, I thought so and so is how it is, then would read another but their theme was different and so on. So for me its how the book works as a whole, the world that was created for the story/series. The author can make it feel so real and believable.

    I can recall a book that left out too many explanations for things happening. For example a werewolf hunter helping a recently turned werewolf not to shift so that he could pass that stage and not become a werewolf. The shifting partially happened (claws, some hair) and then turned back human, but was left as it never happened. It left questions like, Did it affect him whatsoever, why was it totally ignored etc. So its just having maybe a little part within it without the back up of consequences of that, that didn’t make that part believable. Hope that makes sense!

  8. The only book I can think of that was unconvincing involved a town of vampires. The main character was always getting urges to feed off people, but everyone else in the town never seemed to have that problem and the town was even full of tourists. Nothing was ever explained, and I was left wondering why that one character was always hungry. I think that I find books unconvincing when things that you would think are important are not explained, or when they are explained it’s too late or the explaination is incomplete.

    Salt and Silver looks amazing, btw!

  9. Great post! Sounds like a great read as well.
    I get hung up on logistics. To lie convincingly about a demon, you make stuff up, sure, but if it’s not within the realm of possibility, or logically feasible – or just leaves me metaphorically scratching my head – it takes away from the story. Obviously, the author hasn’t reasoned logistics out in the scene.
    Congrats on the release! Looking forward to reading Salt and Silver.

  10. Excellent post and I look forward to reading Salt and Silver.

    Nothing irritates me more than a character who does something totally irrational or just plain stupid. Something like a paranormal investigator looking for a serial killer who is also a master shapeshifter, and meeting this creature several times without realizing it until he (the investigator) is almost killed. This I read in book 1 of a popular series.

  11. Interesting post! It is difficult to sustain the lies or fantasy, but I agree that consistency is key. The personalities and the world that they live in must be coherent and constant for the fantasy to ring true.

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  12. Sometimes I’ve found that some of the mind control/powers business is hard to follow in some pnr and can be unconvincing. I guess it’s hard to find the right balance so that readers can suspend disbelief.

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  13. I can’t think of an example from a book right now but I do have a pet peeve where the characters behave out of character just so as to push the plot in the direction the author wants it to. That really gets to me because it is such an obvious lie!

  14. The last unconvincing lie I read in a book was when a young teenager was sexually assaulted, but recovered from it with amazing ease and quickness– like, within hours!

  15. Hi!
    Sounds like a great book! Would love to be in the drawing. The book is in my sidebar and links back to you. Have a great day!

    Sherrie

  16. I agree with the others that as long as the character is acting consistently I can believe almost anything — character development can overcome most any problem at least for me!

  17. Please sign me up =)
    I just started reading and I haven’t yet ran into something I had a hard time to beleive in =P
    POsted about this contest on my blog (blogs.myspace.com/sinfully_adorable)

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